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Emerging: meets few rubric standards, lacks clear thought, is underdeveloped and has stylistic problems.

 

Developing: meets some or most rubric standards, may be underdeveloped and have simplistic style.

 

Proficient: meets rubric standards. Shows thought and analysis and has interesting and smooth style.

 

Excellent: exceeds rubric standards; shows mature thought and analysis and has interesting and engaging style.

 

 

 

Content/Organization/Structure

 

Style/Conventions
  • Offers a clear statement of theme as thesis of paper in an introduction paragraph that captures attention and leads to the thesis.
  • Has identifiable introduction and clearly sequenced body paragraphs that are connected with transition and internal summary.
  • Offers in each body paragraph a clear topic related to the major thesis.
  • Uses specific examples, concrete detail and quotes from the text with explanatory commentary to show how the chosen theme is developed by the whole book or a significant part of the book.
  • Integrates quotations smoothly with signal phrasing.
  • Offers a conclusion that is not a summary but comments on the thesis and finalizes the paper.
  • Maintains focus set by the thesis.
  • Has objective voice and appropriate tone.
  • Uses complete sentences and correct and varied sentence structure.
  • Has a precise and varied vocabulary and follows guidelines for clarity.
  • Follows English department format.
  • Has few errors in punctuation, spelling, grammar, and usage.

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